Phân tích "Some people believe that the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers instead of benefitting them individually. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi máy 16/4/2022 & 19/11/2023)

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Some people believe that the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers instead of benefitting them individually. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Ở đề này, cần phải đọc thật kĩ đề sẽ thấy có sự gợi ý luôn ở trong đề bài về cách chia 2 đoạn thân bài, đó là:
• Giả sử IELTS TUTOR hoàn toàn đồng ý với quan điểm đề cho thì nếu để ý kĩ 2 keywords là citizens & workers thì 2 đoạn thân bài sẽ được chia như sau:
• Body 1: lí do thứ 1 vì sao totally agree với quan điểm đề cho Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals (viết về citizens) 
• Body 2: lí do thứ 2 vì sao totally agree với quan điểm đề cho Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals (viết về workers)

• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: In order to build a nation where people will help each other instead of turning into money-making machines, we should focus on our education system, especially what we teach our children.
      • Supporting idea:
        • The main purpose of education is to build up an enlightened nation where morality, honesty and integrity would be the key characteristics >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "purpose" tiếng anh
        • They would keep aside their personal ambitions, and work together for the betterment of the country.
      • Example: if talented and experienced doctors treat patients only for the money, healthcare for all would be a distant dream >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Từ vựng topic Health / Health care / Medicine IELTS
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: States spend a lot of tax money to keep the schools and their education system running, schools’ chief objective should be to focus on nurturing morality and good human characteristics among the students while also preparing them for their careers that would benefit society >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "society" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: if schools plan to adopt an education system where teachers’ sole purpose would be to teach children how to be personally benefitted from jobs or businesses, the whole education system would collapse.
      • Example: Finland's education system, renowned for its emphasis on nurturing morality and holistic development alongside academic preparation, stands out for fostering collaboration, critical thinking, and moral values. Teachers play a key role in cultivating a love for learning, ethical behavior, and societal responsibility, contributing to Finland's reputation for an effective and well-rounded education system.

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